冀教版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 UNIT 7 写作能力提升练 (3).pptVIP

Unit7WorkforPeaceUNIT7写作能力提升练

??素材典藏短语dealwith,breakdown,jumpin,intheendreachanagreement,haveafightwith

句型1.Igetangrybecause...2.Then...realized...andsaidsorryto...3.Thanksto...everythingiswellnow衔接词and,or,but,so等

??经典例题好朋友John和Lucy因为琐事吵架了,对此你想说些什么?请根据以下提示写一篇短文?

要求:1.简单描述图片信息;2.提出对朋友间友好相处的建议(至少2条)?［审题指导］1.体裁:记叙文2.人称:第一人称和第三人称3.时态:主要使用一般过去时

［思路构建］

［范文欣赏］JohnandLucyhadafightwitheachother.JohnsentamessagetotellLucythatthegametimewaschanged,butLucydidn’tcheckhermessageintimeandmissedthegame.ForLucy,IwanttotellherthatJohnreallytriedtogetintouchwithher,buthefailed.Shedidn’tcheckhermessagecarefully,sothat’sherfault,notJohn’s.

ForJohn,wheneveryoneagreesonatime,itshouldn’tbechanged.Ifithasto,hemusttelleveryonefacetoface.Sonexttimehemaygotoherdirectly.Then,Iwanttosay,friendsaremoreimportantthanagame.

??写作实践假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫,希望得到你的帮助?请写封回信,内容包括:1.Howyoufeelaboutit;2.Givehimsomeadvice;3.Expressyourwishes.注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数?

DearMike,How’severythinggoing??I’msorrytohearthatyouarenotfeelingwellthesedays.Youdon’tknowhowtogetonwellwithothers.It’snormaltohavesuchfeelings.Don’tworrytoomuchaboutthat.Ithinkyoushouldthinkaboutifthereissomethingyoucandobetter.First,youaresupposedtocommunicatemorewithyourparents.Second,you’dbettergetonwellwithyourclassmatesandfriends.Third,Ithinklisteningtomusicanddoingmoreexercisecanrelax.?I’msorrytohearthatyouarenotfeelingwellthesedays.Youdon’tknowhowtogetonwellwithothers.It’snormaltohavesuchfeelings.Don’tworrytoomuchaboutthat.Ithinkyoushouldthinkaboutifthereissomethingyoucandobetter.First,youaresupposedtocommunicatemorewithyourparents.Second,you’dbettergetonwellwithyourclassmatesand