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英语作文病句分析 1. I have studied math from 7 years old to 19 years old. ----三（5）班 罗同学 I have studied math from 7 years old to 19 years old. 分析错误： 时态错误， from 7 years old to 19 years old 从7岁到19岁学习数学，是过去的一段时间发生的事情，所以应该用一般过去时态 I have studied math from 7 years old to 19 years old. 正确的表达应该是： 1. I studied math from 7 to 19 years old. 2. I have studied math since I was 7 years old 2. Please begin to do something what you like 三（5）班 彭同学 Please begin to do something what you like 这句话要表达的意思是 ：请开始做你喜欢的事。 错误所在：你喜欢的事情，可以用what you like 这个what 引导的宾语从句就行了，那么 something是多余的； 或者something that you like名词+定语从句同样可以表达这个意思。 Please begin to do something what you like 正确表达： 1. Please begin to do what you like 2. Please begin to do something that you like 3.I like singing,but I afraid of others’ laugh. 3.I like singing,but I afraid of others’ laugh. 害怕，be afraid of ,afraid是个形容词 害怕被人嘲笑：be afraid of being laughed at 正确表达： I like singing, but I am afraid ofbeing laughed at by others. 4.One day, there was an accident happened. 三（5）班 没有留名字的同学 4.One day, there was an accident happened. 本句要表达的意思：有一天发生了意外 错误所在：happened是个不及物动词，用在名词后做定语表示被动，相当于一个定语从句 there was an accident that was happened One day, there was an accident happened 正确表达： One day ,an accident happened. 5. Only we experience something can we know whether we can deal with it or not.三（5）班 肖同学 Only we experience something can we know whether we can deal with it or not 正确表达： Only after we have experienced something can we know whether we can deal with it or not 6.This is a thing that I never forgetit forever 三（5）班 肖同学 This is a thing that I never forgetit forever 正确表达： There was one thing that I will never forget 7. You can show everything what you want. 三（5）班 曾同学 You can show everything what you want. 正确表达： 1.You can show everything that you want. 2.You can show all that you want. 3. You can show whatever you want. 8.When you have something want to be done, you should try your best. 三（5）班 曾同学 8.When you have someth