英語书面表达.pptVIP

英语书面表达 English Composition Writing [写作内容] 1. 以约30词概括上文的主要内容。 2. 以约120词就“制定规划与达成目标”这一主题进行议论，内容包括： (1) 海狸修水坝的故事给你的启示是什么？ (2) 请结合你的生活经历阐述“制定规划与达成目标”之间的关系。 [写作要求] 1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事．也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯 Beavers are very diligent dam-builders who can build extremely good dams. However, they sometimes don’t know where to build the dams or which dams should be fixed only because they have no consciousness to make a plan. The beavers’ story illustrates the importance of planning. Without a plan the best intentions and efforts will not produce results. We shouldn’t work blindly but have a clear idea of our purpose, the actions needed to achieve it, and how these should be ordered. As a junior student, I achieved considerable success in learning English through the combination of hard work and planning. I prepared good materials with the help of my teacher, made plans for my daily study and self-monitored the whole process of my learning. I made rapid progress and became very confident. I think I couldn’t have done it without a good plan. Diligence is a key to success, but in my opinion, good plan is also essential. Through planning, we can develop clear goals, find more efficient and effective methods and thus have more opportunities to reach our goals than through hardworking alone. Appreciate and learn the three well organized compositions from students The Essay What makes a good essay? Discussion Content Everything needed included which is related to your view. (内容要完整) Structure *Good beginning and ending (好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) * Proper linking words between sentences 1. Based on this passage, ____________________, making a plan before doing something is essential. 2. ____________, we’ll complete our goal with a reasonable plan. 3. ___________________________ it’s important to have a plan. as fa