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Nathan Zhang;“书面表达” 命题依据及原则;五个步骤;高分作文29分;;假如你班要就“如何为高考做准备”开一个班会，请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对高考备考过程中要注意的事项及建议理由：?????? 1. 保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气；?????? 2. 目标明确、正确评价自己。太低的目标使人松懈，太高的目标使人丧失信心；?????? 3. 与父母、老师或同学沟通帮忙走出困境；?????? 4. 作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。?注意：1．词数100左右，开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 参考词汇：明确的(definite)?? 评价（estimation）;审 题;字 词 文;Appreciation ;Appreciation ;Appreciation ;Students’ version ---- 许丹妮; What’s the most important to us is that we have a definite goal and have a correct estimation about ourselves. Too low a goal will make us slack and too high will make us lose heart. Besides, it’s advisable to talk more with others, like parents, teachers, classmates and so on, which will help us get through difficulties. Needless to say, we need a good rest and a balanced diet to keep us energetic. Come on! Everyone! Challenges and pressures can bring out us the best. Hope everyone will have a wonderful grade in the coming summer.;;;书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则;还要强化“高级、复杂”两个概念 ;　　 　;; 修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。;　倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。 ;Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.;把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。;Only in this way can we achieve our goal.;4. 形容词+as+主语+be动词：;三、主动不如被动巧 ;例如在2006年的高考中，很多学生在表达我们每次可以借五本书最多借十天时：;几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。;口诀：一去，二看，三改。 一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。 ;[原文] The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.;Practice makes perfect !;一、词与词之间的转换 1. 形容词转换为名词 This painting is very valuable. 2. 动词转换为名词 Our hometown has changed a lot these years. ;;3. 不定式与从句的转换 He spoke louder so that the audience could hear him clearly.;（2）If everything is considered, his plan seems to be more workable. When this was done, we went home. Given goo