读写任务作业讲评.ppt

一、读写任务作业存在问题：  * 从化三中 黎群英 1.未能在规定的时间内完成的有4人。 2正文部分框架不正确，没有分好段的有2人。 3.少数同学没有写主题句。部分同学写了主题句但是没有拓展。也就是说一句就是一段。 4.句子的语法错误较多，句子的语序不正确。 5.卷面书写不够工整，个别同学涂改太多。 (2010·广东)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 In junior high school，one of my classmates，Ethan，was addicted to TV. This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who’s the Boss? Then one day Ethan’s mother made him an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjects. She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV. None of us thought Ethan could do it，but he did quit TV. His mom paid him $200.He went out and bought a TV，the biggest he could find. 二、呈现作业 写作内容 1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。 2.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括： (1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法； (2)你的父母(或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的； (3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。 In recent years，hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with cash for showing up or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will. Psychologists warn that money can actually make kids perform worse by making the act of learning cheap. The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should be despite decades of reforms and budget increases. 通过审题弄清楚写作的要求, 包括文章主题、写作内容、主要时态、主体人称等。其中主体人称, 就是要确定以第几人称进行写作。 三、审题 要点（3）：你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习 要点（2）：你的父母(或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的； 要点（1）：你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法 约30词的概括 Para.1 Para.4 Para.2 Para.3 四、框架结构 Para. 2 your opinion 观点：我认为父母这种做法对孩子的发展有不好的影响 提醒：阐明理由 前提：父母用金钱鼓励学习好的孩子 In recent years，some parents have been paying their kids to encourage them to get good grades. In my opinion，what these parents have done has a bad influence on their children’s development, for money can actually make kids perform worse by making the act of learning cheap. （直接表达你的观点 ，并阐明理由) 议论文常用的过渡语表示赞同有： (1) I do agree with the author... 我非常赞同作者的观点…… (2) I quite /totally agree with t