高级英语写作-unit1.ppt

Using Direct Statements-2 The demand for exotic delicacies has caused the reduction of population for endangered species through excessive hunting and overharvesting. Topic : The demand for exotic delicacies Controlling ideas: reduction of population for endangered species Avoiding Using Too General Controlling Ideas-1 (1) a. Modern technology is good and helpful to us. b. Modern technology has improved the quality of our lives immeasurably. Avoiding Using Too General Controlling Ideas-2 (2) a. My brother enjoys water sports. b. Among the water sports that my brother enjoys are snorkeling (潜水), scuba diving（呼吸器跳水）, and water-skiing. Discussing topic fully and adequately 100-200 words; 4-10 sentences A single focus all the details serve the topic sentence Doing housework is hard. I have to get up early to get it all done, and my house is still too big. I feel very lucky being able to afford my house, as the economy is not good and the land value in my neighborhood has gone up since I moved in. Not Unified Living in the city is a fascinating experience. There are various types of people, each offering different ______________________. Also, there are many things to see and do, and everything offers a lesson of some kind. I have lived in a city my whole life and continue to find it fascinating. Living in the city is really enjoyable. a specific feeling or attitude natural or reasonable connection A coherent paragraph means that all the supporting sentences are logically connected in supporting the topic sentence. A cohesive device refers to words, phrases, clauses, or sentences that connect ideas and hence possibly create coherence in a text. 4. Coherence and cohesion Rule one Do not separate words that are closely related unless it is necessary. e.g. Everyone is studying English in the school. Everyone in the school is studying English. exercise One student said th