常见雅思写作连接词问题解析-智课教育出国考试.pdfVIP

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 常见雅思写作连接词问题解析-智课教育出国考试 常见雅思写作连接词问题解析，雅思写作连接词问题是很多考生都 会忽略的问题，下面我们重点分析逻辑连接词使用时几个常见的问题： 漏用逻辑连词 如： 1Home-working enables employees to work at ease. For example, those with childcare responsibilities could arrange their schedule flexibly. 2Working at home ensures employers’ multiple options in human resource. 仔细理解不难发现其实1句和2句之间的关系是平等的，均属于观点 句。为了让这两个句子凸显出相应的地位，以区别中间的举例部分，建 议在1句和2句之前各添加表示递进的逻辑连词，如what’s more或 in addition. 修改后如下文： To begin with, home-working enables employees to work at ease. For example, those with childcare responsibilities could arrange their schedule flexibly. What’s more, working at home ensures employers’ multiple options in human resource… 错用逻辑连词 如： 1 One hand, home-working enables employees to work at ease. 2 Nevertheless, these who are disabled can avoid many difficulties. 原文中1句和2句的逻辑连词都用错了。首先，从语法形式上看，逻 辑连接词一般由连词、连接副词、介词、介词短语等充当。而1句的句 首 “one hand”是一个名词短语，证明不正确。我们需要做的修改是将“one hand”改成一个介词短语 “on one hand”作为1句的逻辑连词;而相对应的逻辑连词应该是 “on the other hand” ，衔接与1句中观点相对应的另一方观点。比如： On one hand, home-working enables employees to work at ease. On the other hand, employees may be confronted with some problems brought by home-working. 而对于2句中的连词使用错误是 “nevertheless”这个逻辑词的意 义与2句中的内涵不符。原文中的 2句 these who are disabled can avoid many difficulties 是对1句观点的一个扩展和支持。所以2句和1 句之间的逻辑不应该是nevertheless所表达的转折关系;相反 ，应该是递 进或举例关系，所以可以做以下修改： On one hand, home-working enables employees to work at ease, especially to those who are disabled, who can avoid many difficulties by working at home. 或者修改为： On one hand, home-working enables employees to work at ease. For example, those workers who are disables can avoid many difficulties by working at home. 滥用逻辑连接词 有的雅思考生主观地认为尽量多用连接词语可以加强句际衔接，但 结果是连接词语过分堆积 ，造成多余 ，评分标准中所提到的 “机械”地 句子衔接(见上文下划线部分)。如: 1 Working at home ensure