写作PPT分析.ppt

① Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. ③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. 文章主体部分通过比较得知大学生兼职利弊兼有．但总体说来，利大于弊。 文章结尾段一言以蔽之．这就是主旨总结。结尾段. 惯用表达法开头： To conclude /On the whole 然后用另外一个词组承接上文 If we take a careful consideration 最后用一句话总结全文 It is sagacious to support the statement that It is not difficult to get the conclusion that It is safe to draw the conclusion that (译) 总之 ，如果我们深思熟虑后，就不难得出结论检查上课出勤是非常必要的一种手段但不有效。为了学生的利益，我们应该采取更多的 措施。 In conclusion ,if we take a careful consideration ,it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that checking class attendance is a most necessary but not effective way . More measures should be taken for the good of the students. 结尾方法二 建议 根据模板，改写下面的结尾 解决交通问题： In order to solve the problem of traffic jam which is facing many large cities .we should take effective measures．First of all，we can open more high ways for the increasing large number of vehicles . In addition，people should be encouraged to take buses or subways rather than private cars to go to work or study. 建议措施常用句型 : 1. It is high time that sh did sth 2. It is crucial for sb to do sth 3. Confronted with the problem ，effective measures should be taken . 4. In this way can we expect to put the situation under proper control 5. The government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control 结尾方法三未来展望 例子1 If more and more people used public transportation，air pollution would be better controlled and expenses would be reduced . Therefore，the public transportation system should take m