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Page ? * 高考写作 高考英语评分标准 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 　　 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 　　 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 　 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 　　 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 　　 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 1 评分标准 keep to the point 覆盖要点 accuracy (spelling and grammar)准确 bright points(words , phrases and sentence)亮点单词,短语,句子 Natural过渡自然 本次月考书面表达(满分25分) 今年是猴年,在中国许多人都喜欢猴子.假定你是李华,请写一封信给你的美国笔友 简要谈谈中国人喜欢猴子的原因和你猴年的愿望. 注意: 1.词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.开头语已为你写好 本次作文要点: 中国人喜欢猴子的原因 你猴年的愿望 What do you think of the monkeys? A story about monkeys What do you think of the monkeys? Some words to describe monkeys 普通词汇 cute clever smart brave good luck 亮点词汇 Intelligence flexibility good fortune symbols 原因句型 The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 （...的原因是...） the reasons why I hold the view that name is very essential to individuals are as follows, The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. Why Chinese people love monkeys? Most of( the majority of) Chinese people love cute monkeys because…… The reason why most of Chinese people love monkeys is that…… The reasons why most of Chinese people love monkeys are as follows: Chinese people are fond of the characteristics of monkeys Monkeys are similar to humans in some ways, which is funny Some movies, TV plays and stories about monkeys are well received among the teenagers in China. 段落安排: 1.引入话题:猴年(New Year of the Monkey) 为什么要写信给Tom?(说明Tom 对中国文化感兴趣) 2.中国人喜欢猴子是众所周知的It is well known that… \ As is well known… 给出原因(注意原因之间的衔接) 注意列举原因时的过渡词 3. 猴年愿望: 自己的愿望以及对Tom的祝愿 自己(联系实际:上理想的大学)go to \ be admitted to Tom(可以自由发挥)enjoy life, good fortune,healthy,successful,etc. 汉语意思 普通词汇 亮点词汇 认为 重要的 支持 不同意 喜欢 好的 坏的 think believe, hold, argue, maitain, harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally ackowledged that, to my mind, as far as I am concerned important essential, vital, significant, notable sup