丁晓钟作文班电子笔记.doc

作文班 模板一： 适应于社会上的不好的现象，如：传统道德的丧失，售后服务，食品安全，人性冷漠，见义勇为，明星代言，创新 第一段： The cartoon jumping into my sight is fairly compelling. It features … 替换fairly// pretty much Features 前面加副词修饰： vividly 第二段： digging into this picture, we may effortlessly find/ identify/ grasp its hidden meaning that lies behind the surface. Sniff 可替代find Digging into this picture deeply, we will sniff the hidden meaning behind the surface. Thirty-plus years into the Reform and Opening up, the Chinese society has reorganized itself in a way the put an excessively high premium on/ place a disproportional emphasis on economic growth over moral education/ quality education. Thirty-plus years into **** I have a decade into college. 更具体的说： to be more specific 在我看来 ： justified by me In a society that is being continuingly transformed by material pursuits immediately // short-term benefits. Far too many traditional values // far too many attributes, mattering much (counting much) for one’s success/ far too many matters, seemingly unimportant in short run, are fading memories/ are becoming something of past. Honesty is high on the list, which is exactly what the creator/ founder/mapper of the picture strives to reveal. This is sorry state of affairs. Confronting such a grim reality, we are supposed to be acutely wake of // wake up to the potential consequence of not valuing/ cherishing/treasuring honesty. This evil trend, posing a persistent and growing threat to the sound development of ourselves and society, must be taken seriously/ must be on an indispensable aspect to be reckoned with// be on the front burner when pushing for a much healthier and more harmonious society. The nature/ root source of 21st century competition favors those with honesty, I would argue. Take South Korea. Thanks to decades-long emphasis on honesty. This state has earned// reaped a growing respect from across the world. Take yaoming, a legendary basketball player/ towering basketball center. His stunning/ topnotch suc