优化课堂高一英语课件：unit4 periodⅳ writing（新人教版必修1）.pptVIP

Section Ⅳ Writing 原句1 Farmers noticed that the well walls had deep cracks in them. 农民们注意到井壁上有深深的裂缝。 点评 这个长句是由两个简单句合并而成： ①Farmers noticed something. ②The well walls had deep cracks in them. 合并：句②是句①中 something 的具体内容，故可用 that 引导句②作 notice 的宾语来代替 something。 仿写 ①昨天他说他再也不会去那里了。 ______________________________________________________ ②我们相信明天会更好。 ______________________________________________________ Yesterday he said that he wouldnt go there any more. We believe that tomorrow will be better. 原句2 Mice ran out of the fields looking for places to hide.老鼠从田 地里跑出来找地方躲避。 点评 这个长句是由两个简单句合并而成： ①Mice ran out of the fields. ②Mice looked for places to hide. 合并：句①和句②主语相同，且句②是句①的目的，故可 将句②的主语去掉，把谓语动词改为现在分词，作句①的目的 状语。 仿写 ①他们坐在那里等待着怀特先生。 ______________________________________________________ ②请拿出笔来准备书写。 ______________________________________________________ They sit there waiting for Mr.White. Please take the pen out preparing to write. 原句3 Slowly, the city began to breathe again.渐渐地，城市又恢复 了生机。 点评 此处 slowly 用于修饰整个句子。副词修饰整个句子时一般 放在句首，并常用逗号隔开，这时的副词常可以代替一些复杂 短语或句子结构。 仿写 ①令人吃惊的是，他并没有按时回来。 ______________________________________________________ ②讽刺的是，建议的提出者却根本不愿改变。 (提示：讽刺 ironically; 提出者 proposer) ______________________________________________________ Surprisingly, he didnt return on time. Ironically, the proposer doesnt want to change at all. 地震 本单元出现的相关词汇： earthquake/quake (n.地震), burst (vi.爆裂；爆发 n．突然破 裂；爆发), event (n.事件；大事), steam (n.蒸汽；水汽), dirt (n. 污垢；泥土), ruin (n.废墟；毁灭 vt.毁灭；使破产), suffering (n. 苦难；痛苦), injure (vt.损害；伤害), destroy (vt.破坏；毁坏；消 灭), shock (vt. vi.使震惊；震动 n．休克；打击；震惊), rescue (n. vt.援救；营救), trap (vt.使陷入困境 n．陷阱；困境), disaster (n.灾难；灾祸), bury (vt.埋葬；掩埋；隐藏), shelter (n.掩蔽；掩 蔽处；避身处), damage (n. vt.损失；损害), frighten (vt.使惊吓； 吓唬), frightened (adj.受惊的；受恐吓的), frightening (adj.令人恐 惧的), at an end (终结；结束), in ruins (严重受损；破败不堪), dig out (掘出；发现), fall down (倒塌), the rescue workers/doctors (营 救人员/医生) 本单元出现的相关句式： 1．At...everything began to shake.在……时，所有东西都开 始震动