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CATTI 高（优秀） 1. 忠实于原文，能准确译出80%以上的重点考点； 2.准确流畅，文字简练，用词恰当； 3.基本无语法错误，基本无错别字，标点符号使用正确。 中（及格） 1. 基本忠实于原文，能准确译出60%以上的重点考点； 2. 文字表达基本正确，用词基本恰当； 3.有少量语法错误、错别字和标点符号错误。 低（不及格） 1. 错译、漏译严重，只能译出60%以下的重点考点； 2.句型结构受原文影响严重，用词不当； 3.有较多语法错误、错别字和标点符号错误。 Example 1 《蛙》 先生，我们那地方，曾有一个古老的风气，生下孩子，好以身体部位和人体器官命名。譬如陈鼻、赵眼、吴大肠、孙肩······这风气因何而生，我没有研究，大约是那种以为“贱名者长生”的心理使然，抑或是母亲认为孩子是自己身上一块肉的心理演变。这风气如今已不流行，年轻的父母们，都不愿意以那样古怪的名字来称谓自己的孩子。我们那地方的孩子，如今也大都拥有了与香港台湾、甚至与日本韩国的电视连续剧中人物一样优雅而别致的名字。那些曾以人体器官或身体部位命名的孩子，也大都改成雅名，当然也有没有改的，譬如陈耳，譬如陈眉。 Example 3金沙江电站移民安置项目 Resettlement of Persons Displaced by Hydropower Stations along Jinsha River Zhaotong city of Yunnan province is located at the juncture of the Yunling Plateau and the Sichuan Basin, exhibiting high mountain and deep valley landform（山高谷深）. Local climate is mostly subtropical, averaging 12.6 degrees Celsius in a year, and annual rainfall is around 760mm. The city has 5.6 million population, and 23,000 square kilometers in area. （汉语一句，只有一个主语；英语三句） Zhaotong used to be a key part of the southern route of China’s Silk Road to India and beyond（古“南丝绸之路”）. Ethnic minorities, including Miao, Yi, Hui and another 20 minority ethnic groups, live scattered around the city, totaling 542,000, or 10% of Zhaotong’s population. Zhaotong’s GDP was RMB30.24 billion in 2009, ranking seventh among all sixteen cities in Yunnan province. GDP per capita was RMB5,400. Three of the four selected counties (total 11 in Zhaotong) are national-level poverty counties, and around half of the population lives under poverty lines. Local natural, biological and mineral resources are abundant but remain to be fully tapped. Thin people have a long list of logical things they are always spouting off to me. They hold up one finger at a time as they reel off these things, so I wont lose track. They speak slowly as if to a young child. The list is long and full of holes. It contains tidbits like get a grip on yourself, cigarettes kill, cholesterol clogs, fit as a fiddle, ducks in a row, organi