2011年12月英语四、六级作文.docVIP

2011年12月英语四级作文Directions: Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of time.” Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 从今年的四级作文命题的角度来看，其充分体现了“关注社会热点、反映当前社会具有普遍意义和教育意义的现象”这一命题原则，本文的命题关注了青年成长中“具有坚强的意志对成功的重要性”这一话题，是十分具有教育意义和现实意义的话题。 从命题要求中，我们可以看到此次命题的考试内容为励志型话题，与学生的日常学习生活和人生观有关。命题属于依据材料来分析问题的文章体裁，对于这样的话题，我们可以借用永恒的三段式这一模式，首先依据背景材料来提出问题，“从戒烟的问题引出做任何事情都需要坚强的意志，需要坚持到底，不可半途而废。”之后分析这一问题，可以正反论证，也可举例论证，此为主体段落，可以通过“人生要靠自己创造”、“人的潜力无穷”、“任何苦难和痛苦都是对自己的挑战，其收获到的经验将是无穷的”。也可以引用名人名言，如“where there is a will, there is a way”。最后一段，可以总结来论证坚强的意志对于成功的重大意义。 Writing 1 Everyone tries to achieve success in his career. However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails. Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway. Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty. Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything. I believe that “where there is a will, there is a way”, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts. Writing 2 There is an old saying: where there is a will, there is a way. It tells us that a strong will is the most essential quality that anyone who wants to achieve success. It can contribute a lot to one’s success. Although “All roads lead to Rome”, n