英语人教版九年级全册书面表达专题复习.pptVIP

2017年中考复习 ;Welcome to Beijing !;How do these happen?;air pollution;water pollution;;Forests and homes have gone;What should we do to protect the environment now?; ;; ;;;1）表示并列关系的：and, also, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result…;;; 要点： 节约能源：比如步行上学，离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等； 节约用水：不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环用水等； 节约金钱：不乱花钱，尽量长时间地使用物品 节约时间：努力学习，做有意义的活动 参考词汇：energy，turn off，water tap， reuse 要求：1）内容包括所提供的信息要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译； 2）不得透露自己姓名、学校等信息。;;评价: 请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。 1. fluency流畅 consecution条理: (Yes or No) Beginning ( ) key sentences( ) linking words( ) ending ( ) Choice of words and sentences: The number of spelling mistakes ( ) The number of grammar mistakes ( ) Does he write good words or sentences? ( ) 3.Others:_____________________________ A ( 13-15 分 ) :包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚． B ( 11-12 分 ) :基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚． C ( 8-10分 ) :内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意． D (6-7分 ) : 要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达．E (3-5 ) :只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云．F ( 0-2分 ) :白卷或文不对题． 作者：________　　得分：________ 评价人:_________ ;As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t