高中英语_Book7 Unit4 Writing A letter of apology教学设计学情分析教材分析课后反思.doc

规范！规范！规范！向细节要品质！ PAGE 4 A letter of apology 教学设计 设计教师： 单位： 【训练目标】 A letter of Apology 【 【2018年考纲解读】 ☆总体要求：准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。 ☆高分特点1.切中主题：认真审题，准确把握写作任务的主旨，确保内容围绕主题展开。 2.内容完整：覆盖所规定的各个内容要点，完整地实现交际目的。 3.表达准确：语言运用要贴切、规范、得体，有能力支撑交际目标顺利达成。 4.行文连贯：各要点间关系紧密，脉略清晰，相辅相成。 5.亮点若干：扩展的思想性，语言的多样性和灵活性。 【真题再现】 (2016课标全国 = 3 \* ROMAN III) 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。 注意： 1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【习作修改】 How are you going recently, Bob? I am very sorry to say that I couldn’t go to the bookstore with you on this Saturday. I want to go out with my parents for a picnic, that can relax me and broaden my horizons. I hope this sudden change will not cause too much trouble to you. Can we go to the bookstore on Sunday? We will meet at the school gate at 8 a.m. in the morning in order to have more time to choose books. If you don’t like it, please let me know what time suit you. I am looking forward to hear from you. 【难点突破】 一、写得正确 (单句改错) 1. I am writing to tell you my apologize 2. I feel terribly sorry and I have to take part in an activity. 3. The reason is why I will attend an important party. 4. If you are convenient, I will wait for you at 8 a.m. at the school gate. 5. I am sorry to say that I can’t accompany you to go to the bookstore. 6. I hope we can book other time to meet. 二、写得地道（感悟改写） 1. I am writing to give my apology to you. ________________________________________________________________________________ 2. You don’t be angry. I will go with you on Sunday. ________________________________________________________________________________ 3. We can meet at the school gate at 8 a.m. this Sunday. ________________________________________________________________________________ 三、写得得当(选材精当) 1. Suddenly, I want to read books at home. 2. My mother is ill and I have to take care of her. ☆Your own convincing reason: __________________________________________________________