高考英语读后续写备考：读后续写，五步成文.docx

高考英语读后续写备考：读后续写，五步成文 在指导学生进行读后续写时，通常要求学生按照“读全文——找伏笔——巧构思——定锚点——精打磨”五个步骤进行思路的梳理和写作。以下通过一份例题分析，介绍这五个步骤的具体操作。 [题目呈现] 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My presentation was horrible. I lost the client（客户）. My boss wouldn’t look me in the eye and the rest of my day was spent in relative silence——I was left alone， in reality. Finally， I left my air-conditioned office and of course， outside it was hot as hell（地狱）. I was hot literally and figuratively as three buses passed， too full to stop and then the one that did stop should have kept going because the air conditioning wasn’t working. I boarded the bus but was unable to stand it， so I squeezed my way off at the next stop. I would just walk the mile and a half to home. I annoyed further， as I continued my journey. I refused to take off my jacket， purposely， maximizing my frustration（沮丧）——“when it rains， let it pour” was my philosophy（态度）. A block from my building， I heard the water splashing（溅） and kids screaming（尖声叫）so I knew the fire hydrant（消防栓）had been turned on. Without even thinking about taking an alternate route， I turned the corner， sure enough， there was a group of children playing water. They were politely on the lookout to stop the water from spraying on any passer-by， so when they saw me they stopped the water and when they saw my mean look， they even got quiet. The younger ones in bathing suit， the girls wearing shower caps and the boys with water guns all stared at me as I started to pass by. Then I noticed a little one， no older than five， holding a water gun down by his side， eyeing me a little harder than the others. I eyed him back. Then his brother， who I had seen around the neighborhood， nodded at him like he was saying，“I dare you.” My eyes tightened a little further as I communicated my own “I dare you” to the five-year-old. Then his eyes moved， planning his escape route through the alley， and in that split second I knew I was going to get soaked. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 续写部分分为两段， 每段的开头语已为你写好。