2022高考英语考点突破Unit35阶段写作方略5市赛获奖.ppt

佳作赏析 图表作文——话题类类; (2010·如东高级中学高三月考) 自1978年以来，我国海外留学生回国人数逐年上升。请在Shanghai Daily上发表一篇文章，根据图表叙述海外人员回国情况，分析回流原因，并希望更多的海外学者回国创业。;上海出国人员回归统计图;上一页;1．话题特点：本篇书面表达属于图表作文中的话题类。这类作文要认真审题，完全读懂图表所提供的信息，然后根据信息内容确定文章的写作体裁——说明文。 2．写好这篇文章要注意： (1) 分析图表，表述内容要点。学生在写作时应注意图表内容提供的是1978到2010年末中国在海外留学生的回归情况，特别要注意的是2007年后的图表信息变化。 (2) 发表自己的观点。图表只是客观地提供了一些数据信息，要真正说明情况还需要作者根据自己的理解发表观点，在发表自己的观点时必须把方框内提供的说明融合进去。;(3)将所列举的要点组织成语句。适当使用关联词，要特别注意语句以及内容的逻辑关系，先说明留学生回归的数量变化，然后说明回归原因。 (4)文章虽然是说明文，但作者需要在文章末尾发表自己的感想，以起到画龙点睛的作用。 3．常用的句法结构： (1)看图导入： As we can see, the diagram shows us... As can be seen from the diagram，... From the diagram, we can get...;(2) 图表的信息说明： There be... The year...witness... The total number es up to/reaches... (3) 对图表客观数据的说明： The reversal of...arises from... It is...that result in the reversal. The cause of the reversal is due to three facts. firstly..., secondly..., finally...; As can be seen from the diagram, there has been a reversal of the brain drain since 1978 across the country. Between 1978 and 2007, about 7,000 overseas Chinese returned to Shanghai after completing their studies abroad. They accounted for about 25% of all returnees nationwide. The year 2008 witnessed a boom. The number of returnees came up to 15,000.By the end of 2010, a further 22,000 will have returned to this city. The reversal of the brain drain mainly arises from three facts. Firstly, our government values overseas Chinese scholars highly, and has worked out a series of preferential policies. In Shanghai, they can enjoy a modern lifestyle. Secondly, Chinas economy has been developing at a high speed, which provides them with a vast space of development. Thirdly, the current global financial crisis leaves many overseas Chinese out of work or at the edge of being laid off. They feel more secure at home because the economy is more stable. I hope that more overseas Chinese can head home. There is a bright future ahead of them.;本文能够围绕说明的话题，结合