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大学英语四级写作备考讲座;Contents;评分原那么;Otherfactsworthmentioning

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改卷老师重点看这三个地方：

1.改卷老师根据文章结构确定分数段〔书写要工整干净，要写出清楚的三段式。一段最多4-5分，2段最多6-7分。

▲作文的框架和书写是让老师给你一个不错分数段的关键之关键。

2.主题句是否突出。在每个段落开头〔或结尾〕有没有清楚地给出主题句。

3.全文扫读，发现刺眼和亮眼”的内容。;评分标准及样例;样例;2分—一塌糊涂;;5分—糊里糊涂;;8分—马马虎虎;;11分—清清楚楚;;14分—漂漂亮亮;;

Example;Nowadays,moreandmoremuseumsareopentothepublicforfree.Freeadmissionstomuseumswillmotivatepeople’sinterestsinhistory,artsandscience.Inthisway,museumscanprovidepeoplewitheasieraccesstoknowledge,whichisofvitalimportanceforthewholenation.;However,somepeopleholdthatfreeadmissionstomuseumscanbringaboutmanyproblems.Sinceanybodycanenteramuseumwithoutpaying,themuseumcanbeovercrowdedanditwillbeadifficultjobformuseumstomaintaintheircollections.Besides,museumswillfacefinancialproblemssincetheycan’tmakeprofitsfromtheadmissionfee.Duetothedecreaseinprofits,museumshavelessmotivationtoup-datetheircollectionsandout-of-datemuseumscan’tavoidthefatetocloseupinthelongrun.;Inmyopinion,freeadmissionstomuseumsaregoodforthepublic,butontheotherhandtheymayposeproblemstothemuseummanagement.Governmentsshouldprovidehelptomuseumsandguidethemtoservethepublicbetter.;高分作文特点:

1：长短句交替出现；2、适当使用插入语；

3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；

4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；?

5、句型使用准确、地道。;常见错误;3.1.用词搭配不恰当

However,thespeedofacarismuchfasterthanthatofabicycle.

However,thespeedofacarismuchhigherthanthatofabicycle.

Inthepastthepriceofmilkwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.

Inthepastthepriceofmilkwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.

Nowadays,thetrafficinbigcityisgettingmoreandmorecrowded.

Nowadays,thetrafficinbigcityisgettingheavierandheavier.

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3.2人称不一致

Somepeoplethinkwecanrealizeourdreamsifwestudyathome.You