初中英语七年级英语上册期末写作范文.docx

初中英语七年级英语上册期末写作范文

1．假设你是初中生李华，你的朋友因考试失利而心情十分低落，请从积极勇敢地面对挫折的角度写一封电子邮件鼓励他，不少于60词。

Theexamresultsmaymakeyoudeeplydisappointed,butthisisjustatemporarydifficultyinyourwholelife,notadefiningmoment.Lifeisfullofupsanddowns,andlearningisaprocesswithbothsuccessandfailure.Theimportantthingishowwedealwiththosechallengesandlearnfromthosemistakes.Pleaseaskyourfriendsandfamily

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【答案】例文DearFriend,Theexamresultsmaymakeyoudeeplydisappointed,butthisisjustatemporarydifficultyinyourwholelife,notadefiningmoment.Lifeisfullofupsanddowns,andlearningisaprocesswithbothsuccessandfailure.Theimportantthingishowwedealwiththosechallengesandlearnfromthosemistakes.Pleaseaskyourfriendsandfamilyforsupportduringthisdifficultperiod.Staypositiveandrememberthatdifficultiesaretemporary,butyourpotentialislimitless.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyoubecomestrongerandhearingfromyousoon.Bestwishes!LiHua

【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”，部分表达可以使用“一般将来时”；③提示：邮件的写作要点已隐含在题干中，即鼓励朋友积极勇敢地面对考试的失利，同时要注意邮件的格式，开头称呼和结尾落款不能遗漏，并且需要表达真挚的情感来鼓励朋友。

[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开头先表达对朋友考试失利后心情的理解，引出自己写邮件的目的，即给予鼓励；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生活中挫折的普遍性、面对挫折的正确态度、从挫折中学习成长”等几个方面来阐述如何积极勇敢地面对挫折，可以结合自己的经历或名人的例子来具体说明；第三步，书写结语。表达对朋友未来的信心，鼓励他保持积极心态，并期待他早日走出阴霾，同时可以适当表达对朋友的关心。

[亮点词汇]①deeplydisappointed深感失望②temporarydifficulty暂时的困难③definingmoment决定性的时刻④fullofupsanddowns充满起伏⑤dealwith应对⑥learnfrom从……中学习⑦staypositive保持乐观⑧limitless无限的

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①Theexamresultsmaymakeyoudeeplydisappointed,butthisisjustatemporarydifficultyinyourwholelife,notadefiningmoment.（转折关系的并列句）

②Theimportantthingishowwedealwiththosechallengesandlearnfromthosemistakes.（表语从句，其中how引导宾语从句）

③Pleaseaskyourfriendsandfamilyforsu