2016届海南省琼中中学高三英语二轮复习----高三下第四次综合考试作文讲评.pptVIP

相关词汇短语 月考作文得分情况分析(Class 1) 月考作文得分情况分析(Class 8) 考生作文 句型仿写训练 Homework 作文讲评训练 你是高三年级的一名学生，今年即将高中毕业。请你根据下面所给的要点提示，就关于“高考志愿选择”用英语写一篇短文，描述学生中存在的两种想法。 注意： 1．词数：120左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 你的看法并说明原因 3 1. 众多课程选择 2. 求职更受青睐 首先选择大学 2 1. 个人兴趣 2. 社会需求 首先选择专业 1 理由 观点 major, university, view, reason, choose, interest, need, society, course, job, … think, in one’s opinion, prefer to do, agree/disagree, as far as I am concerned, after all, in a word, however, therefore, … 定语从句，状语从句，非谓语动词作状语或定语，…… 9.8 1 20 失分原因： 1. 审题不当，角度错误，造成跑题丢分； 2. 论述不到位，过多添加，没有表达到要点； 3. 缺少过渡词和高级表达，文章显得平铺直叙。 16~20分:5人 6~10分:9人 11~15分:21人 1~5分:12人 平均分 最低分 最高分 5.3 0 20 失分原因： 1. 审题不当，角度错误，造成跑题丢分； 2. 论述不到位，过多添加，没有表达到要点； 3. 缺少过渡词和高级表达，文章显得平铺直叙。 16~20分: 2人 6~10分: 13人 11~15分: 5人 1~5分: 23人 0分: 6人 平均分 最低分 最高分 A good major or a good university Every student will be faced with the choice when he passes the College Entrance Examination. Should he choose a good major or a good university first? Different students will offer different answers. Some students think the choice should be based on their own interests, which may help them take favorite jobs in the future. Or, they should select major first according to the need of society. However, others prefer to choose a good university for it can provide them with a wide range of courses. If graduating from leading universities, they are more likely to find a good job. Personally, the best choice is a good major at a good university. If we cannot obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve success in a certain field if we try our best. 1. 我们都知道，玩手机会消耗我们大量的时间，也对我们的视力有害。(as we all know, cause bad influence on, 定语从句) 2. 只有这样你才能够专注在学习上并考上你喜欢的大学。(only引导状语放在句首部分倒装，be admitted to, focus on) 1. As we all know, playing on the mobile phone costs lots of time, which can als