高三英语外教点评学生英语作文后的思考课件.pptVIP

　　This cultural base of China, this strain of music that vibrates through the soul of a people, and this way of making and sharing music, will serve, in this　outsiders mostly ignorant opinion, as part of the solid ground upon which China can build a dynamic and powerful future. 中国学生的句子 1．原句：I think if you know the two sides of the netting, you will have a good way of using the computer. 修改后句子：The Internet has two sides, you will just have to find a good way of using it. 2．原句：When I have free time, I’ll enjoy them very much. 修改后句子：I think when I have free time I will play with them a lot. 3．原句：Fishing, collecting stamps, I just like them. 修改后句子：Fishing, collecting stamps, I like them all. 4．原句：On the other side there may be a famous emblematic building of the country, and also have the value of the coin and the date. 修改后句子：On the other side there may be a famous emblematic building of the country, the date and the value of the coin. 5．原句：In the basketball court two strong teams were playing a bitter match. One of the teams is ours, the other is class 4’s team. 修改后句子：On the basketball court there were two very good teams playing a bitter match, one of the teams was ours, the other one was class 4’s. 6．原句：The last minute arrived and the scores were equal. We pushed for victory and we won 23-21. 修改后句子：Finally the last minute arrived and the scores were equal, we really wanted to win and so we tried our hardest and the final score was 23-21. We won. 7．原句：I flew with Northwest Airlines from Shanghai Pudong International Airport，we passed across the Pacific Ocean and our plane arrived in Detroit at 10:30 in the morning, local time. 修改后句子：I flew with Northwest Airlines from Shanghai Pudong International Airport，we flew across the Pacific Ocean. We arrived in Detroit at 10:30 in the morning, local time 8．原句：The second floor included about ten rooms. Some were used to be offices, the others were bedrooms for some workers. 修改后句子：Some were u