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《作文突破》 目标：看上去就是篇高分作文 第一章 开头五式 背景介绍 例子： waste on campus Nowadays, waste is quite prevalent and serious on campus. Food is thrown away simply because it doesn’t taste good. Newspapers and magazines are discarded, because they have been read. What is worse, students seem to be quite accustomed to such waste and don’t have a feeling of guilt. But waste can do much harm 背景概述 背景详述 全文中心句 On disposal products Disposal products are gaining increasing popularity in china. Now they practically become part of our life: we have disposal chopsticks, disposal cups, disposal clothes, disposal cameras… Indeed we are in a throwaway society On Advertisement Advertisements appear everywhere in modern society. When you walk along the streets, you can see large billboards with pretty girls smiling at you. When you read newspapers, you see half the pages covered with ads. When you turn on TV, you see commercial advertisements again. Whether you like it or not, advertising pours in your life. Impulsive shopping Recently the issue of … has been brought into focus. Nowadays one of the pressing problems confronting our society is… 2. 场景描写 A Boom in Adult Education Every Tuesday and Friday evening sees Miss Li, my neighbor and a secretary in a company rush home after a hard day’s work, gulp down her meals and then hurry out to catch the bus for her English class. Miss Li’s case is not unique, and now an increasing number of city adults spend their leisure time trying to improve themselves at school or college. 大学生找工作难 If only I could be offered a job- even with little pay! Last time when I was in job market I overheard a cry uttered by a graduate, who, obviously had been turned down for many times. These days it is know to all that it is increasingly difficult for college students to find jobs. What are the reasons? In the first place What’s more Last but not least There are few places where you can not expect to find such stories从个别上升到一般 3