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案(七)言简意明的非谓语动词
众所周知,作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味, 句子与句子之间的关系显得 松
散;而作文中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘, 读起来费劲。而恰当地运用非谓语动词对简 单句
和复合句进行转换,不仅显得句式多样、句子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑、言简意明。
一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句
写作时,我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行转换, 使其成为较高级的表达方式。
转换时可采用 “三步法 ”:
笫二步 找淮两个冏单句的对播点 ?让一 亍句子 作为 主干 .片- 牛
句子用 卄 谊谥动诃邊存改耳 .
第三步
K 殆应 H1 啊榊儿 iH 谄创词 ,把握好动诃的时态 和暗态 ?时后烽接起来 .
示例
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第一步:写出两个简单句。
① I want to improve myself by rea di ng some books.
② The books were writte n in the Tang Dyn asty.
第二步:让句 ① 作主句,用非谓语动词改写句 ② 。
第三步:让句 ② 作定语,由于其动词 write 与主语 the books 之间为被动关系,故用过
去分词短语作定语。
I want to improve myself by reading some books written in the Tang
Dynasty. (2017 ?全国卷 I 书面表达 )
其他几个转换的例子如下 :
① Mount Tai st an ds in Shandong Provi nee. It has long bee n a popular tourist
attract ion, with many Chin ese lege ndary stories attached to it.
T Standing in Shandong Provi nee, Mount Tai has long bee n a popular tourist
attract ion, with many Chin ese lege ndary stories attached to it. (2017 ?北京高考书
面表达 )
In the newspaper of our school there is a column called Foreign Culture
② “ ”.
It aims to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.
Tin the newspaper of our school there is a column called Foreign Culture
“ ”,
aiming to introduce American customs and the life of high school students. (2015 ?全 国卷 I 满分作文 )
[即时演练 ]用非谓语动词进行句型转换
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