基础写作的写作技巧(如何写出复杂性的句子).pptxVIP

Basicwriting

基础写作

Howtowriteastoryaboutaperson?

本节课重点难点重点：短句变成长句，尤其是复合句和并列句的使用。难点：五个句子之间的自然过渡和衔接词的选用是写作难点。

OurmathsteacherMakethesentencelonger.Thelonger,thebetter.Ourmathsteacherisawoman.Ourmathsteacherisa________________woman.Ourmathsteacherisa___________woman,who____________________________________________________________,ourmathsteacherisa_________________woman,who_____________________________________.

某中学生英语报社举办中学生“2005感动中国”观后感征文。你被2005感动中国人物洪战辉的事迹深深感动。根据下面提示写一篇征文，投给这家报社。洪战辉事迹简介：1、1982年出生于河南农村；2、1994年父亲得了精神病并在当年捡来了一个刚出生的女弃婴；3、1995年，母亲不堪重负离家出走。4.他边学习边照顾捡来的妹妹和生病的父亲，担负着常人难以想象的重担考上大学，并一直带着妹妹上大学，照看她……写作要求：只能用5个句子（不包括已给出的部分）表达全部的内容。参考词汇：2005感动中国TouchChina2005

Group11.Recently,IwatchedTouchChina2005onTV.2.IwasdeeplymovedbythestoryofHongZhanhui.3.HewasborninHenanProvincein1982.Sentence1:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Recently,IwatchedTouchChina2005onTVandwasdeeplymovedbythestoryofHongZhanhuiwhowasborninHenanProvincein1982.

Group2Hewas12.Hisfathergotmentaldisease.Onedayhebroughthomeanabandonednewly-borngirl.Sentence2:____________________________________________________________

Group31.Hismothersufferedfromtheheavyburden.2.Ayearlater,hismotherdesertedthefamily3.Hongbegantoshouldertheresponsibilityfortakingcareofhislittlesisterandsickfather.Sentence3:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ayearlater，hismother,sufferingfromtheheavyburden,desertedthefamilyandHongbegantoshouldertheresponsibilityfortakingcareofhislittlesisterandsickfather.

Group41.Honglovedschoolandstudiedhard,2.Hewasfinallyadmittedtocollege.3.Hetookhissisterwithhiman