61　第三部分　读后续写　第二节　第1讲　续写热点话题　个人成长.pptxVIP

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典例演示(2023·新课标I卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.第1讲续写热点话题个人成长

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyourewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.第1讲续写热点话题个人成长

IchosePaulRevereshorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorsesmouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelseschoice.第1讲续写热点话题个人成长

Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevereshorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalf-dozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.第1讲续写热点话题个人成长

WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidntwin,Iwouldntcare.注意：续写词数应为150个左右。第1讲续写热点话题个人成长

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