一项关于英语作文批改模式的探究和反馈的调查.pdf

致谢 2008年我考入了上海师范大学攻读教育硕士学位，这三年期间我的老师、 同学和家人给了我莫大的关心和支持，很高兴能有这样的机会来表达我对他们的 谢意。 首先，我要深深地感谢我的导师卜友红。本论文是在我的导师卜友红教授的 悉心指导下完成的。她严谨的治学精神，精益求精的工作作风，深深地感染和激 励着我。从课题的选择到论文的最终完成，卜老师都始终给予我细心的指导和不 懈的支持。由于我是外地学生，且孩子还没有断奶，只能通过E-mail和打电话 的形式与导师交流想法，但卜老师给予我充分地理解和支持，她曾多次在百忙之 中抽出时间对我的论文进行从头到尾的审阅。对此我心存感激，在此谨向我的导 师卜友红教授致以诚挚的谢意和崇高的敬意。 其次，我还要感谢在一起愉快的度过研究生生活的各位同学，正是由于你们 的帮助、支持和鼓劲，我才能克服一个一个的困难和疑惑，直至本文的顺利完成。 因为我是外地学生，不管是学业还是生活上，上海的同学都给予了我关心，在这 里请接受我诚挚的谢意!谢谢你们! 在此，衷心感谢答辩委员会的各位老师们，你们百忙之中抽出时间来审阅论 文，为我指点迷津；谢谢你们! 最后，我要感谢我的家人，感谢他们给予我精神上的鼓励与支持! Abstract The development and pro黟ess ofthe information and communications technology promotes the society into a knowledge-based society,driving the economy globalized and making English play a more important role勰an international commtmication bridge．Technological advances provide a strong technical support for learners’ growing needs of different language learning鹪well舔the English teaching reform． The English teaching of China also follow this trend．There are eleRi requirements for the computer／web-based teaching methods in English in‘‘College English Curriculum Requirementsissued by the Ministry of Education．English writing is one of the necessary skills for English leamers．However,writing haS always been the weakest points of college students in China．Among the many reasons,the composition correction for college students haS an impact on the improvement of learners’writing proficiency and ability．It has gradually become a reality that the computer network is used in English teaching，whieh lays the foundation for building a new way of composition correction．Students used the traditional text composition in the past, which leads to a specific time and space constraints of a range of teaching links as well勰the slow pace of communication and low efficiency between teachers and students．The network environment brings great convenience to composition correction．Students sending compositions through emails and teachers Can receive feedback in time． The thesis i