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compound-complex sentence 并列复合句 * A Day to Remember * 3. loose, periodic, and balanced sentences 松散句、圆周句（掉尾句）或对偶句 P 37 Ⅱ. Type of Sentences 句子类型 (rhetorical 修辞的 point of view) * 松散句 A loose sentence puts the main idea first, and lets the reader know what it is mainly about when he has read the first few words. * 圆周句 In a periodic sentence, the main idea is expressed at or near the end of it. * 对偶句 When a sentence contains two parallel clauses similar in structure but contrasted in meaning, it is a balanced sentence. * Loose sentences are easier, simpler, more natural and direct. * Periodic sentences are more complex, formal and literary. * Balanced sentences are impressive. They are mainly used in formal writing, like expository 说明的 and argumentative 议论的 prose and speeches. * * My National Day * P41 Ⅲ. Effective Sentences 有效句 1. Unity 统一性 2. Coherence 连贯性 3. Conciseness 简洁性 4. Emphasis 强调性 5. Variety 多样性 * P41 1. Unity 统一性 A unified sentence expresses a single complete thought. It does not contain ideas that are not closely related, nor does it express a thought that is not complete by itself. * Ⅲ. Effective Sentences有效句 1. Unity 统一性 2. Coherence 连贯性 3. Conciseness 简洁性 4. Emphasis 强调性 5. Variety 多样性 * 2. Coherence 连贯性 Coherence means clear and reasonable connection between parts. * P42 2. Coherence 连贯性 1) faulty parallel constructions 平行结构使用有误 2) pronouns with ambiguous reference 代词指代不明 * 3) dangling(mispalced) modifiers 垂悬修饰语（使用不当的修饰语） 4) confusing shifts in person and number or in voice,tense and mood.人称、数、语气和语态上的变动混乱 * Ⅲ. Effective Sentences有效句 1. Unity 统一性 2. Coherence 连贯性 3. Conciseness 简洁性 4. Emphasis 强调性 5. Variety 多样性 * P 46 3. Conciseness 简洁性 A sentence should contain no unnecessary words. If the idea is fully expressed, the fewer words are used, the better. Wordiness only obscures the idea. * Ⅲ. Effective Sentences有效句 1. Unity 统一性 2. Coherence