基础英语写作—描写文写作.pptx

Descriptive Writing《英语写作》 Definition of description Description is used to convey the readers the physical characteristics ofa persona placean objecta scene Important points1. Careful observation before writing Q: Which aspects can you observe? colorfiguresmelltaste sound when we bite itObserve with five sensesImportant points1. Careful observation before writing 2. Grasp and bring out the distinctive features or outstanding qualities What are the distinctive features of “deep-fried ice-cream”?smell taste 3. Focusing on the thesis The place where I feel most at home-and most contented is in the mountains: “my heart home” is there. I like best a spot just where the timberline begins, with a wide, spreading meadow in front of me and the forest just behind me. Meadow flowers dot the grass, and big rocks, for sitting and musing, jut up here and there. It is summer, and the flowers are mostly brightly, open-faced daisies and black-eyed Susans. On the upper edges of the meadow are maples in full leaf and pines that sing in the wind and drop their needles to make a forest floor behind my cabin. My cabin is an old-fashioned log one, with a high chimney of mountain rock. When I sit by my fire and read at night I can hear the mountain stream trickling over the water-worn rocks in its bed. The music lulls me to sleep, or rather to that stage between waking and sleeping when I briefly experience real serenity, despite the world’s worries beyond my mountain.Can you find out the topic sentence in the sample writing? Does the topic sentence present the dominant impression? 4. Choose a proper writing orderSpatial order Chronological order Logical order The place where I feel most at home-and most contented is in the mountains: “my heart home” is there. I like best a spot just where the timberline begins, with a wide, spreading meadow in front of me and the forest just behind me. Meadow flowers dot the grass, and big rocks, for sitting and musing, jut up here and there