作文优化六大的原则.docVIP

作文优化六大的原则 　　首先让我们来看一道作文题： 　　假定你是李华，暑期时间到尼泊尔（Nepal）参假国际志愿者支教活动，请用英文给国际志愿者组织网站写信介绍支教情况。主要内容包括： 　　1. 担任化学教师，实验课让同学们了解了很多神秘的现象； 　　2. 尽管当地没有电，也没有自来水，没有课本，但是你适应了艰苦的生活条件； 　　3. 支教活动让你收益，让你更懂得理解和帮助别人； 　　4. 号召更多的同学参加志愿者活动。 　　注意：1. 词数不少于100； 　　2. 书信格式及开头均已给出； 　　3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 　　请同学们比较以下两篇作文： 　　Dear Sir and Madam， 　　I’m a high school student from China， I worked as a volunteer teacher in Chemistry in Nepal during this summer vacation. This experience made me learn about the local life in Nepal. Now， I’m writing this e-mail to show you my unforgettable experience there. 　　Although there is no tap water， electricity or textbooks， I managed to adapt myself to the poor living conditions and teaching. I’m proud that I taught some useful knowledge in my chemistry experiment lessons. In fact， my voluntary job not only rewarded the local people but also improved myself. It has helped me understand the meaning of helping the others in need. 　　The voluntary job has benefited me a lot， so I call on more and more students to join in this activity and more voluntary activities should be organized by . 　　I’m looking forward to sharing more voluntary experiences. 　　Yours， 　　LiHua 　　Dear Sir and Madam， 　　I’m a high school student from China， It’s a privilege for me to serve as a volunteer teacher in Chemistry in Nepal during this summer vacation. Honestly speaking， this impressive experience made it possible for me to learn about the local life in Nepal in the flesh. Now， I’m writing the E-mail to picture my unforgettable life there. 　　Faced with the fact that there is no rap water， electricity or even no textbooks， I managed to adapt myself to the poor living and teaching conditions. Actually， what made me proud was that I introduced them to some practical problems in my chemistry experiment lesson， which used to be mysteries to the local students. Their thrilled and amazed expressions will never fade away from my memory. In reality， not only did my voluntary job rewar