小学语文人教部编版（新）四年级下册(2018)2022.4市二模写作分析 公开课.pptxVIP

二模应用文分析：新闻报道 假设你是李华，你班今天与英国姊妹学校Hampton School在线共上一堂课，介绍各自国家的传统节日。请你就此事给校刊英文栏目写一篇报道。内容包括：1. 活动目的；2. 活动过程；3. 活动反响。1. 审题 假设你是李华，你班今天与英国姊妹学校Hampton School在线共上一堂课，介绍各自国家的传统节日。请你就此事给校刊英文栏目写一篇报道。内容包括：1. 活动目的；2. 活动过程；3. 活动反响。参与者时间事件内容文体、时态1. 审题 2. 评改 1. 活动目的 本次活动的目的应该是与该活动的意义相关，特别是要凸显双方的彼此交流。如: In order to promote the mutual understanding of traditional festivals / Aimed at promoting cultural exchange between the two schools / Aiming to enhance the friendship between two schools X 将活动内容作为活动目的 In an attempt to introduce the traditional festivals of our two countries3. 主要问题总结 2. 活动过程 应在主体段对活动过程进行程序性的描述而非单纯活动内容的描写或者纯粹介绍节日。如: X The class activities covered diverse parts, ranging from introducing our different traditional festivals to sharing different opinions on cultural differences X The Spring Festival is a time when everyone comes back home and enjoy family reunion. 应适当添加程序性连接词 在主体段介绍中国和英国传统节日时，应注意以下几点关键心思：1. 线上；2. 中国和英国（不能单方面输出，也不能笼统，泛泛而谈）；3. 传统3. 活动反响 在尾段描写参与者（学生、老师）对活动的反响，而不是该活动的意义或者是参与者的所得。在写反响时，最好是双向的。 X The activity serves as a platform for the students to gain a deeper understanding of British culture. A Meaningful online class To enhance mutual understanding, today we had an online class with Hampton School, our sister school in the UK, introducing our traditional festivals to each other. We started by presenting the origin, significance and celebration ways of the Spring Festival with pictures and videos. Afterwards, students from Hampton School described their traditional festival, Guy Fawkes Night(英国烟火节). In the next session, we asked questions and exchanged opinions in a relaxing atmosphere. This online class was well received. Wang Ming, one of my classmates, said, “It provides a meaningful platform to promote our culture and get a glimpse of the UK.”3. 范文赏析