考前作文串讲.ppt

2013高考考前作文串讲;一、启——事件的铺垫;(二) 讨论场景：讨论 — 决定 Questions concerning where to go stormed into every inch of our minds. (讨论目的地) Having brainstormed many an idea, we finally decided to help farmers with baling corns, which tended to be prior to other alternatives. (学农受教) ;(三) 出发行走场景：(做事) Last weekend, together with/ accompanied by my classmates, we set off to canoe down the lake in Summer Palace. (划船) It didn’t take long before we reached the spot of hiking. (远足) Upon settling down the relevant details, we approached to the bookstore by bus instantly. 准备 ;(四) 欢迎场景 They clapped their hands to give us a warm welcome. We were welcomed warmly by the locals who left us a deep impression by their hospitality. ; (三) 出发行走场景：(遇人) I was at ......early that morning, hoping to ... All of a sudden,a grey-haired woman limped with a heavy step in my direction. (爱心志愿) This morning, I was jogging along the road near my neighborhood when something occurred./ when sb presented.(爱心志愿) ;二、承与转— 事件的发展;(二) 心情承接： + Upon arrival, a sense of delight filled my heart. On the way to ..., laughter brimmed this warm bus. Joy danced all the way to the string of our hearts when we were chatting with each other in relief . ;(二) 心情承接： - His tearful expression / pained look/ was just like a pebble disturbing a still pond in our hearts. (- / + / 中立 ) Confusion was clear on their faces and immediately it dawned on me that / I realized they must have lost. Witnessing all these in despair/ in rude, I had very mixed emotions.;(三) 原因承接 thanks to + n + thanks to the fact that + 句子 + owing to + n + owing to the fact that + 句子 + due to + n _ due to the fact that + 句子 _;(三) 原因承接 + Satisfied / Contented with the idea that ……, we made an agreement to do …… . Encouraged / Attracted by the fact that ……, I suggested doing ...... . -