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我倾向于同意儿童每天在电脑上花费太多时间会对他们产生负面的影响。 I tend to /am inclined to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day. 产生负面的影响 Produce/have/exert negative effects on sb 修改前:I am inclined to agree that the children spend too much time on their computer everyday will have a negative effect on their life. 修改后:I am inclined to agree that children’s spending too much time on their computer everyday will have a negative effect on their life. 其部分原因是不论儿童为何使用电脑,长时间坐在电脑屏幕前,都会对儿童的视力和坐姿有害。 This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can

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