新人教高中英语书面表达训练.pptVIP

1. 关系不一致 [误]If she have much money, she can buy many things that she want. [正] 1) were→was 2) have→has 3) its→their 4) hurries→hurried 5) →He lived in the countryside for two years, and he always remembered his life there. 写作中，同一主语和语态最好贯彻到底，不要随意地忽而主动语态，忽而被动语态。 6) won’t→ shouldn’t 语气一致 7) time→ times 2. 词性混淆 [误]When people have difficult, we should help them. [正]When people have difficulty, we should help them. 1) against→ is against 2) →She often goes to school by bus. 3) past→ passed 4) careful→ carefully 5) Asia→ Asian 6) Fortunate→ Fortunately 7) Jumped down into 3. 用词累赘 [误]If you lend me 50 dollars, I’ll repay back you next week. [正]If you lend me 50 dollars, I’ll repay you next week. 1)去掉again 2) 去掉more 3)去掉future 4)去掉go to，因为hurry to本身具有“匆忙去”之意 5)去掉it 6)去掉by himself 7)去掉a.m.或in the morning 8)去掉with fear 9)去掉in， last month/year/week； next month/year/week； every month/year/week前均不加介词in 10)去掉it， too…句式中主语是不定式的宾语时，不定式宾语要省略 4. 无连接词错误 [误]You practice more reading, your reading ability will be improved. [正]If you practice reading more, your reading ability will be improved. [析]英语句子的特点之一是重“形合”，句子的各个部分要由各种连词、关系词等连接起来；而汉语句子是重“意合”，句子前后连接主要是通过上下文的逻辑意义来实现的，连接词的使用远远少于英语， 1)→A person will not have a healthy body if he has not enough food. 2)→Although I am tired, I must go on working. 3)→Because China is still a developing country, most people can not afford a car yet. 4)→If you use your head, you’ll find a way./ Use your head, and you’ll find a way. 5)→The teacher spoke slowly in order that/ so that the students might understand her. 6)→I arrived at the station after the train had left./ When I arrived at the station, the train had left. 7)→We all went home after the picnic because it had started to rain. 8)→We were looking for your new coat, but we could not find it. 9)→The sun warms the earth, which makes it possible for plants to grow./ The sun warms the earth and this makes it possible for plants to grow. 10)→His bedroom seemed empty and t