大作文主体段写作要点与结构分析.pdfVIP

主体段——“念念不忘，必有回

响”

•延展性(development)

•连贯性(coherence)

•完整性(unity)

•词汇(vocabulary)

•语法(grr)

主体段三要素

•句

•论点

•论据

TOPICSENTENCE

•指明方向的旗帜—决定论证方向

•告诉考官这段是干嘛滴

•不用想太多开门见山

•尽量避免长句，清晰明了无错

e.g.1

•BODY1：Itistruethatnewmodern

buildingslookmuchmoreglamorousand

functionterthanoldones.(拆老房子：

用现代建筑对比)

•

•BODY2：However,theabovereasons

cannotjustifytearingdownoldbuildings,

especiallyhistoriconeswhichrepresent

localuniquehistoryandculture.（修护老

房子）

e.g.2：工作是否是生活的全部

（2013.1.10）

•BODY1:Noonecandenytheimportance

ofworktoa.（工作很重要）

•BODY2:However,thebeliefthat

occupationalendeavourmakesourlife

meaningfulandrewardingdoesnot

necessarilyleadtotheassumptionthat

withoutasatisfyingcareer,lifeis

meanings.（工作不是生活的全部）

•installpublicsportsfacilities

•tosolvepublichealthissues.

•TS1:Noonecandenythe

importance/effectsofinstallingpublic

sportsfacilities.

•TS2:However,thebeliefthatmoresports

facilitieswillimprovethesituationdoesnot

necessarilymean/leadtotheassumption

thatitistheonlyeffectivewaytosolve

publichealthissues.

•TS1：没人可以否认绘画课对于培养孩子

们想象力和创造力的重要性。

•TS2：然而，绘画课可以帮助孩子们的发

展并不意味着需要把它变成必修课

compulsorycourse。

•Noonecandenytheimportanceof

paintingsonsondevelopingchildrens

imaginationandcreativity.

•However,thebeliefthatpaintingsons

arebeneficialforchildrensdevelment

doesnotnecessarilyleadtothe

assumptionthatitneedstoecompulsory.

e.g.3：/网络与人际关系

（2012.8.9/2009.8.8）

•Obviouslythemunicationtechnologies

help